beneath these stars
beneath these stars
i rise and fall on your shores like the tides
the sky is a witnesses
the stars are its eyes
moonlight gently outlines and illuminates
dark waters rushing over soft wet sands
sweeping in and retreating
pausing…repeating
beneath these stars
you can hear the sweet music of our motion
you are the beach
i am the ocean
© 2006 DLM
i rise and fall on your shores like the tides
the sky is a witnesses
the stars are its eyes
moonlight gently outlines and illuminates
dark waters rushing over soft wet sands
sweeping in and retreating
pausing…repeating
beneath these stars
you can hear the sweet music of our motion
you are the beach
i am the ocean
© 2006 DLM
posted by iron at 9:44 AM
7 Comments:
I LOVE IT!! I am so happy that you finally decided to do this. Even if just to share a piece of your talent with the rest of the world.
But ummm you can keep your sexcapades to yourself Bruh!!! LOL!!! Just kidding...seriously, you have a gift...well this is one of many. Hopefully this will help you to grow and share some of your other talents with the people...like your films.
You know you getting added to my Blogroll *rollin my eyes at you*
really nice...love the ebb and flow.
Love it. I'm open - I love a man who can express themself in the form of poetry. It shows the softer side. (men don't always have to be so damn "hard")
I'm happy that you've posted another piece. I'll add you to my page (hint, hint for you to keep posting...lol)
I agree with Phoenix, it's nice when a man can truly express himself. You have a gift; please continue to use it.
zee dub - see it wasn't even about sex, it was about learning to swim!....haha
bb - thanks! ebb and flow...i get it.
phoenix - i'm not afraid to show a softer side but if you ask anyone who knows me they will swear i don't have one!
blu - thanks you. i've added you to my links as well!
*Oh* guess you know where my mind was....*awwwwwwww gawd, make mine a double Earl*
I love your writing talent!
I love the imagery and the symbolism.
I love your choice of words and how they flow so well together.
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