missed understanding
some get your love
then take it for granted
these are the ones who regret when loves lost
others just love being in love
hopeless romantics
these are the ones who care not for loves cost
then you have those who believe in soul mates
someone out there for everyone,
and those who don't believe at all
and are just content with have fun
i believe love’s an understanding
between two people who care so much
and realize no matter how demanding
nothing should ever come between us
understand fights, arguments, minor drama
in any relationship are inevitable
but when these disagreements become all to common
is when some of the good times become forgettable
i understand that love can blossom fast
and begin with the simplest smile or kiss
but also I understand love cannot last
when that understanding has been missed
© 2006 DLM
then take it for granted
these are the ones who regret when loves lost
others just love being in love
hopeless romantics
these are the ones who care not for loves cost
then you have those who believe in soul mates
someone out there for everyone,
and those who don't believe at all
and are just content with have fun
i believe love’s an understanding
between two people who care so much
and realize no matter how demanding
nothing should ever come between us
understand fights, arguments, minor drama
in any relationship are inevitable
but when these disagreements become all to common
is when some of the good times become forgettable
i understand that love can blossom fast
and begin with the simplest smile or kiss
but also I understand love cannot last
when that understanding has been missed
© 2006 DLM
posted by iron at 12:30 PM
7 Comments:
Hi and thanks for stopping by. I felt the passion and pain of this piece. I hope you continue to write and provide another place in the bloggersphere for me to visit.
Nice post. Are you experiencing some if the issues stated in your post?
blu - you're welcome. yeah, i'm gonna post some more stuff as soon as i can get it together.
phoenix - presently, no. alot stuff i'm going to post is from the past. i came across them and re-read them and they reminded me of where i was not too long ago. also reading them helped me understand my attitude and feelings towards certain situations today. that said, alot of the poems will be a bit dark but writing them and getting them off my chest helped me get thru those times.
Hope all is going well for you. It is good to write it down gives you a chance to clear your head. It's hard when begin to feel that the person that you're in love with takes you for granted. Please, thank you, I am sorry just fall by the wayside.... Keep writing!
FINALLY! I am glad you finally did it. I know this is only a small indication of what's more to come, so you know I'll be visiting often. Hope your writing helps to get you to where you want to be.
this is a wonderful poem, but that's kinda jacked up we only have the one. you've got some work to do, folk.
You're speaking the truth!!
Love this!
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