perfect part 1
she fell into his eyes
without even rippling the surface
to him her image was perfect
he didn’t want to blink
or even think
afraid to make waves
in his gaze and disturb it
to him, her image was perfect
open stingin’ eyes wide and teary
soon grew dry and weary
infact it blurred his vision
he couldn’ t see clearly…
but he let them burn away
chose not to close them
and refused to turn away
from her image
because to him she was so perfect
so incredible
that as a reminder to himself
he put her up on a pedestal
‘cuz to him
she was
a step above
everyone else
…including himself
her image was perfect
and in an effort to preserve it
he turned a deaf ear to those who didn’t share his vision
so he either couldn’t hear or dared not to listen
when his friends would contend that she wasn’t worth it
his fam had notions that all his devotions, she didn’t deserve it
but you think he heard it?
pssshhht!
didn’t even scratch the surface
to him her image was perfect…
© 2006 DLM
without even rippling the surface
to him her image was perfect
he didn’t want to blink
or even think
afraid to make waves
in his gaze and disturb it
to him, her image was perfect
open stingin’ eyes wide and teary
soon grew dry and weary
infact it blurred his vision
he couldn’ t see clearly…
but he let them burn away
chose not to close them
and refused to turn away
from her image
because to him she was so perfect
so incredible
that as a reminder to himself
he put her up on a pedestal
‘cuz to him
she was
a step above
everyone else
…including himself
her image was perfect
and in an effort to preserve it
he turned a deaf ear to those who didn’t share his vision
so he either couldn’t hear or dared not to listen
when his friends would contend that she wasn’t worth it
his fam had notions that all his devotions, she didn’t deserve it
but you think he heard it?
pssshhht!
didn’t even scratch the surface
to him her image was perfect…
© 2006 DLM


24 Comments:
we've all been there before. when we have someone we think is all that but we are so blinded by the illusion.
oh by the way FIRST!
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I love this Ironmunki...this was really tight. As I read I was thinking about the "who" that had my nose wide open like this. Wish I woulda listened to the Fam woulda saved me a lot of heartache in the end!!!
Looking forward to part 2
Ditto on what Royce said...isn't crazy how we've sometimes gotten so caught up and caught out there, that you'd go on red and stop on green.
Great piece and a vivid reminder of how blinding love/infatuation/lust can do.
...ok tell me part 2 has an happy ending because the way it sounds she's going to turn to be a bia bia. ahh who am i kidding, happy endings only happens in the movies.
Beautiful, this is my first visit here and I feel right at home...I'll be back again.
wow. Beautiful way with words. Loved it.
Illusions are all we have
In a transient world.
Would we bear
to see the reality
behind the screen of illusions?
I fear not.
Beautiful poem.
I think we all live and nourish with illusions, some good, some bad.
your words are a just DAMN.
i've never been any good at giving praise for poetry, so i'll just say DAMN again and move on.
Look at you...
...my goodness! :D
I'm so glad I stopped back by to check on ya! ;)
~Trish
Whoa...good shit.
"her image was perfect
and in an effort to preserve it
he turned a deaf ear to those who didn’t share his vision"
i recognize that feeling...that's infatuation at its pinnacle! ;-)
You know I love this, right??
This piece reminds me of the illusion that we sometimes create when we are smitten by a person. You're so enthralled in that person to the point where you see what you want to see and refuse to see what you need to see because its not apart of the vision of them that you'd like to perceive.
Nice. So when's your book coming out!?!?!?! =)
I'm serious!! lol
Sometimes the image is trully perfect though, isn't it?
Held my breath during this one
Brilliant
Your style of writing is great.Everyone seems to in one way or another develop their "own", you have done that and done it well. I am linking you..I will continue to check back. And I think she's gonna be OK, sometimes other peoples perception is based on what they "don't" have.. The others perception of her in this in my opinion are an example of that.
her image was perfect...
at times we wish to have a perfect body, perfect soul and a perfect life.
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