they'd fallen
they’d fallen
to insatiable, intangible animal attractions
lust, greed and the need for satisfaction
left them feeling backed in
could they handle a scandal from such scandalous actions?
they gambled on passion…
past experience shoulda taught ‘em…
from the trouble it’d brought ‘em…
stealin’ time like thieves
they’d fallen
like the leaves from the trees in the breezes of autumn
they’d fallen
like the rain
so gentle and wet
never mind ‘bout the pain
the resentment, regret
they’d soon find when shame
finally came home to nest…
deal with that after
more pressing things now
caught up in the rapture
wipin’ sweat from their brow
heavy breathin’, chests heavin’
like beasts in a fight
hearts beatin’, hips meetin’
in the heat of the night…
fleshly desires…
expire
with dawn’s creeping light
fleeting…retreating
receding from sight…
they’d fallen
like two angels fallen from grace
a head hung in shame
and a tear stained face
engulfed in the flame
of a passionate torch
now smoldering with blame
and consumed with remorse
they’d fallen
© 2006 DLM
to insatiable, intangible animal attractions
lust, greed and the need for satisfaction
left them feeling backed in
could they handle a scandal from such scandalous actions?
they gambled on passion…
past experience shoulda taught ‘em…
from the trouble it’d brought ‘em…
stealin’ time like thieves
they’d fallen
like the leaves from the trees in the breezes of autumn
they’d fallen
like the rain
so gentle and wet
never mind ‘bout the pain
the resentment, regret
they’d soon find when shame
finally came home to nest…
deal with that after
more pressing things now
caught up in the rapture
wipin’ sweat from their brow
heavy breathin’, chests heavin’
like beasts in a fight
hearts beatin’, hips meetin’
in the heat of the night…
fleshly desires…
expire
with dawn’s creeping light
fleeting…retreating
receding from sight…
they’d fallen
like two angels fallen from grace
a head hung in shame
and a tear stained face
engulfed in the flame
of a passionate torch
now smoldering with blame
and consumed with remorse
they’d fallen
© 2006 DLM
posted by iron at 1:32 PM
17 Comments:
Wow, excellent work!!! I love the symbolism that you use in your writing. I think you might have a new fan :-) Thank you for sharing your gift.
Dane! As I was reading I pictured the scene. Isn't it crazy how the raw sexual urges and actions of humans are similiar to that of animals. I was hoping they could get "caught up in the rapture" of love but instead it sounds like they were caught up in only shame.
"...like the leaves from the trees in the breezes of autumn, they'd fallen" - I love that line.
You are awesome!!
This was simply genius! I loved it! WOW! You continue to amaze me! =)
It is against everything that he believed in, yet he's powerless to stop it. He rages war against himself, and when he eventually succumbs, everything falls in its place. Only true love brings out these feelings, and there is no shame in that.
Shame, in listening to what society dictates, what to do, how to feel, instead of following your own heart.
"Do you love her?"
"I was fucking her, wasn't I?", from We Don't Live Here Anymore.
WOW! what a welcome to your page! i will go ahead and be a little arrogant in thinking this is a tribute to me?!?!? ;-)
~fallen angel
Wow. Sounds like homie got a hold of an average/bad piece of azzzzz.
like beasts in a fight
hearts beatin’, hips meetin’
in the heat of the night…
fleshly desires…
expire
with dawn’s creeping light
fleeting…retreating
receding from sight…
they’d fallen
This is how I feel 80% of the time after I loose CHI. Oh I can't wait to feel the 20% feeling again!
You've done it once again. WONDERFUL
I think you might have outdone yourself with this piece. This poem gave me graphic images of two people caught out in their tumultuous union. FANTASTIC!!!
Okay, I'm patiently waiting for the next one...
I found a poem today while cleaning out the garage and it reminded me of this piece. I'll post it!
So what is they married and cheatin or something LOL!! Ok Ok I got jokes...but this was hott!! In a number of ways. We've all gotten caught up in the passion of a moment that later revealed itself to remorse and regret. This was surreal...I agree with Babybear...humans and animals...not a whole lot of distinct differences...
My kind of animalistic attraction, this was hoooooooooooooootttt!!! I couldn't resist reading further :)
"engulfed in the flame
of a passionate torch
now smoldering with blame
and consumed with remorse
they’d fallen"
You have no idea how much this touched me
Superb
pretty words...
I am speechless.
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